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Moon Goddess

20:19 Mar 30 2010
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Last year one of my brother's friends gave me some poetry magnets for my fridge since he knows I like writing and poetry. So I took them all out and stuck them up on the fridge and looked over the words and started piecing what I could to make a poem. This is what came of it. I couldn't think of a name until now though.





~Moon Goddess~

Shining moon in the night sky;

Goddess of dreams and sleep.

Gorgeous light beneath bare white winter forest;

there whispering sweetly are shadows.

Beautiful you are like time in a moment

but the sun rose today.


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Ringmaster
Ringmaster
05:51 May 02 2010

I grazed through your journal, and found this to be my favorite. Not because its new, but because the imagary is more masterful now than some of your older poems. First Comment on a poem I've made in a long time.








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